Write a Sandwich Poem!

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By jdeschene

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Take a Bite of this Tasty Form

Despite the way it sounds, a sandwich poem is not inherently a poem about sandwiches (although it could be if you wish). The word "sandwich" refers to the form because the poem's meter and rhyme scheme are set up like a sandwich.

The basic structure of this form is a four-line stanza. The first and fourth lines have the same meter. These lines form the "bread" of you sandwich. I like to use septameter (seven feet to a line), but you can use whatever you want. The two middle lines, your "filling," are as close as you can get to half the meter of the first and fourth line. For instance, if my first and fourth lines were septameter, my second would be trimeter (three feet to a line) and my third would be tetrameter (four feet to a line). The short lines are sandwiched between the longer lines, thus the name of the form.

The rhyme scheme is figured out the same way. The "bread" lines should rhyme with each other. The same goes for the filling lines. Basically, the scheme should look like this: ABBA, CDDC, etc.

Here's an example of a sandwich poem I've written. Hopefully, it will better illustrate the form:

The poet shivered slightly as he scribbled down his last.
A shining masterpiece!
And soon, he'd have his sweet release!
And all his years of hardship, they would fade into the past.
 
The man of ninety seven years, or maybe one month shy,
Had slaved his life away
Just waiting for that one sweet day
When inspiration moved his pen, and he at last, could die.
 
The words he wrote were not so sad as such a man should be,
But singingly they sang.
Of hope and joy, like bells they rang.
They pondered on the splendor of the Heavens he would see.
 
At last, the poet felt no want, no hunger, no caprice.
He wrote the final word,
His spirit soaring like a bird,
And, feeling free, he closed his eyes and slipped away in peace.
 

Sandwich poems are fun and challenging. Try writing one and see what you can create.

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G-Ma Johnson profile image

G-Ma Johnson Level 4 Commenter 4 years ago

very interesting..thanksĀ  G-Ma :o) I will give it a try

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Shirley Anderson 4 years ago

I have to ask....are you the poet that wrote that verse? It is so poignant! (think I spelled that wrong)

I'm glad you inserted that example. I've always been poetry challenged. My idea of poetry is Poe's, The Raven. I was having trouble understanding your written explanation, but thanks to the sampling, I now get the gist of what you said in a lovely way.

Well done!

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jdeschene Hub Author 4 years ago

I am indeed the author of that example. And thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it and found it useful.

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MasonsMom 4 years ago

I love your poem! Thanks for sharing it and this style!

P.S. Could you make the poem a bigger font? I had to squint to read it. thanks!

starfox 4 years ago

oh sandwich oh sandwich just vainish

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JarrodHaze 4 years ago

So Abba is a sandwich artist? I think Subway should sue.

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RKHenry 3 years ago

Neat idea.

lama 3 years ago

hahahahahahahahahaha lol

agata 2 years ago

well done i think it was good try a nother poem now and i will see how good it is going to be and i will tell u dont worry :):):)

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ShonEjai Level 1 Commenter 7 months ago

where does this genre come from, do you know? curious. thanks for the post. www.picture-speak.com

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JJ Pascoe 6 weeks ago

Like this a lot, and your example was excellent!

I'm always looking for more poetic forms to play with, and it's so annoying when people technically explain the rules, but don't actually give you an example of it.

Thanks very much for a very informative and well-written hub!

dana cruz 5 weeks ago

pretty neat stuff

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